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    相关热词搜索:作文 英语 独立 关于独立的英语作文 孩子独立的英语作文 篇一:关于孩子独立性问题的大学英语作文 As it has come to be known,there's an increasing number of family in China that has an only one child since the inception of the family planning policy.It's no doubt that children enjoy more love and care than before。However, more attention should bepay to the phnomeno that some of them get used to depending on their parents which cause the lack of independence. To educate them to be independent,some effective metnods are adviced for their parents.Foremost,parents should help the child establish an independent consciousness from childhood.By telling stores or playing games,parents can affect the development of their character indrectly.Childhood education is of great significance to the formation of independence.In addition,as a famous going says,Knowledge comes from practice.Only by offering more chance for children to face the world individually can they broaden their horizon and learn to find the right position in the society.Last but not least,parents should provide some advice and assistance when their children are in some trouble that they can not conquer by themselves. Personally speaking,it's parents that playing an essential role in children's growth. I strongly believe that parent should help their children be independent by instructing them in a proper way rather than planning and considering everything for them.篇二:初中英语作文:谈谈孩子的独立教育 初中英语作文:谈谈孩子的独立教育 nowadays in china, many students are the only child in their family. they are the apple of their parents' eyes or even their granparents', so they are free of any house work or menial labor. and moral education is no more than some bookish thing. studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers. to educate them to be independent, the most effective way is to let them experience on their own. therefore,they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room,which can be regarded as part of the moral education.篇三:Academic independent 关于学术独立的看法 英语作文 Standing upon the shoulders of Giants to a further sight Academic independent become a famous topic in academic circles recently. Many masters proposed young people should build their own career and research area as soon as possible,for their own accumulation and reputation in academia. In these masters opinions,with the patrons from others, the young people hardly have their own thought,furthermore,sometimes they have to do something which is against their wills. So,those kind,thoughtful scholars advise young man Earnestly to leave those patrons and to expand their own horizon. As far as I am concerned,I am not quite agree with the opinion of these respected scholars. In my opinion,the supervisors can give a richer experience to the young people. Many young researchers are lack of experience on experimental study and social life,with the help of the supervisors,they can got the way to find truth. In addition,supervisors have a wildly connection with other scholars,and the clever young researchers will use it to get more opportunity and built their own network. Besides,following the master’s research project do not truly matter the young people got their own idea,on the contrary,it can inspire young people’s thought. For example,the Saussure’s disciple, Charles Bally,who edited Saussure’s lecture notes to a famous book <the general linguistic>,become a great linguistic too by following his teacher’s step on parole. And according to the record of the Nobel Natural Science Prize,40% winners are the relationship between student and teacher in the word,however,the number of it even get 60% in USA. Let’s us to see another example without patrons, Samuel Johnson have spend eight years to write the book A dictionary of the English language through many difficult without one act of assistance. If he got any patrons from Earl,maybe this work will be easier and faster. It will not like this,so hard and exhausted. As a famous saying by Newton, If I have seen further, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants. In my opinion,the young people should not too eager and anxious to build their own research area. Only by accumulation and learning the experience from predecessors can we receive the success. Furthermore,with patrons from others,it can be efficient to get what you want.篇四:2015年6月英语四级考试作文范文:自立是生存之本 2015年6月英语四级考试作文范文:自立是生存之本 自立是人的生存之本。21世纪的社会充满着竞争和挑战,但这也同时意味着面对竞争与发展,必须学会独立地思考问题,勇敢地去做出自己的决定!当一个人处于人生道路的关键时刻,的确需要父母的抉择,但是请记住:依靠不是依赖!树立自立的意识,掌握独立生存的本领,你将面对一片放飞的蓝天。2015年6月英语四级考试作文,其中一个题目就是关于自立是生存之本的话题。 题目: Part I Writing (30 minutes) (请于正式开考后半小时内完成该部分,之后将进行听力考试) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 180 words. “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.” 参考范文: As is shown in the cartoon, a girl said to her mother,“Good news mom!I was accepted to the college of your choice.” To our surprise, the girl’s look and clothes are just the same as her mother’s. Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as an ocean. In the modern society, it is very common that nearly most of parents do the everything that it should be done by their children. So the children will becomeincreasingly vulnerable. When they have to make their own choices, they even don’t know how to make a right choice, still less to say to be a winner in this competitive society. Independence is the soul of man's survival. As a matter of fact,the society of the 21st century is full of competition and challenges, but it also means that facing the competition and development, we must learn to think independently, bravely to make our own choices! When a person is in a critical moment of life, he really needs parents’ choices, but please remember that reliance on is not dependent on! Setting up the consciousness of independence and mastering the independent ability to survive, you will face a bright future. 来源:文都教育篇五:中考英语作文范文孩子的独立教育 中考英语作文范文孩子的独立教育 围绕:学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况.写一不少于80个词的主题为”孩子的独立教育”英语作文.给出词:only child, moral education篇六:英语作文 一美国历史上重要的人物事件——托马斯杰弗逊 Thomas Jefferson,third president of the United States (1801-1809) and author of the Declaration of Independence.He was one of the most brilliant individuals in history.His interests were boundless,and his accomplishments were great and varied.He was a philosopher,educator,naturalist,politician,scientist,architect,inventor,pioneer in scientific farming,musician,and writer,and he was the foremost spokesman for democracy of his day. As president,Jefferson strengthened the powers of the executive branch of government .He was the first president to lead a political party,and through it he exercised control over the Congress of the United States. During his tenure in office ,he protected agriculture and the development of the national capitalist industry. He bought Luis Anna State from the hands of France, which made the United States more than doubled its territory.Jefferson swore his hostility,he said,to “every form of tyranny over the mind of man.” During his lifetime he sought to develop a government that would best assure the freedom and well-being of the individual.托马斯杰佛逊,美国第三任总统(1801-1809)和作者的独立宣言。他是有史以来最辉煌的人。他的兴趣是无限的,他的成就是巨大的和多样化的。他是一位哲学家,教育家,政治家,科学家,博物学家,建筑师、发明家、先锋科学农业、音乐家和作家,他是他的天,民主最重要的发言人。 作为总统,杰佛逊加强了政府的行政部门的权力,他是第一个领导一个政党的总统,通过它,他对美国国会的控制权。在他任职期间,他保护了农业和民族资本主义工业的发展。他从法国手中购买了安娜路易斯的国家,这使美国的领土增加了一倍多。杰佛逊发誓说,他对“人的思想的每一种形式的暴政”,他说,在他的一生中,他试图建立一个政府,将最好地保证个人的自由和福祉。 独立战争The American War of independence, (English: American Revolutionary War, 1775 - 1783), or the American Revolutionary War is the revolutionaries of the British Empire and its North American thirteen colonies, as well as several European powers of a war. This war is largely began to fight against the economic policies of the United Kingdom, but later because France, Spain and the Netherlands joined the war against the British, and make war far more than the British North America. At the same time, many Indian people were fighting for the two sides.. 由于英国对殖民地的剥削,为了对抗英国的经济政策,导致了北美人民的抗争。始于1775年4月的莱克星顿枪声,1776年7月4日大陆会议通过了由托马斯·杰斐逊执笔起草的《独立宣言》,宣告了美国的诞生。 Because of the exploitation of the colonies in Britain, in order to fight against the British economic policies, the North American people's struggle. Began in April Lexington gunfire in 1775, July 4, 1776, the Continental Congress through the penned by the Thomas Jefferson drafted the declaration of independence, proclaimed the birth of the United States. 在战争中,英国能够利用他们在海军上的优势以占领殖民地的临海城市,但如何控制乡村地区却使他们困惑。经过北美人民的艰苦抗争,终于在1783年迫使英国承认美国独立。独立战争结束了英国对北美人民的殖民统治,实现了国家的独立,确立了比较民主的民主体制,对拉丁美洲和法国大革命起到了推动作用。这场战争同时也为了日后加拿大的建立做准备。 In the war, Britain was able to take advantage of their naval superiority in the occupied colonies of the Linhai City, but how to control the rural areas but make them confused.After the hard struggle of the American people, and finally forced the United Kingdom in 1783 to recognize the United States Independence. War of independence over British colonial rule in North America people, to achieve national independence, established the Democratic democratic system, the Latin American and French Revolution to the role. The war was also preparing for the establishment of the future of Canada. 二 澳大利亚景点介绍 Australia has a vast territory and a colorful place. The mysterious and enchanting wilderness, sunny beaches, majestic mountains, colorful coral reefs, the prairies, many kinds of rare birds and animals, attracting numerous tourists... The following is some of the most famous attractions Sydney Opera House, Opera House Sydney, is located in Sydney, australia. This comprehensive art center, in the history of modern architecture is considered to be a huge sculpture of the typical works, is also a symbol of australia. About 3000 farm show held annually at the Sydney Opera House, about two million spectators to join the festivities, is one of the largest performing arts center in the whole sector. Australia's Gold Coast is located in the eastern coast of Australia, there is a stretch of forty-two km, composed of dozens of beautiful beach resort, it is the famous Gold Coast in Queensland. "Gold Coast" is a sub tropical marine climate, the sun shines throughout the year, the air is humid, all seasons are suitable for tourism, 澳大利亚有一个广阔的领土和一个丰富多彩的地方。神秘迷人的旷野,阳光灿烂的海滩,雄伟的山脉,五彩缤纷的珊瑚礁,草原,多种珍稀鸟类和动物,吸引了众多游客…以下是一些最著名的景点 悉尼歌剧院,歌剧院悉尼,位于悉尼澳大利亚。这种综合性的艺术中心,在历史上的现代建筑被认为是一个巨大的雕塑的典型作品,也是澳大利亚的象征。约3000场农场展每年在悉尼歌剧院举行,约有二百万名观众参加庆祝活动,是整个行业最大的表演艺术中心之一。 澳大利亚的黄金海岸位于澳大利亚的东海岸,有一段绵延四十二公里,由数十个美丽的海滨度假胜地组成,它是昆士兰著名的黄金海岸。黄金海岸“是亚热带海洋性气候,一年四季阳光普照,空气潮湿,四季都适合旅游, 三美国联邦制总统选举 The United States presidential election is the most important electoral system in the United States. The presidential election is held every four years. The current presidential election in the United States need to go through the following four stages: the nomination of candidates, the election, the election of the president, and finally by the voters to vote for the president. The president of the United States by the voters to vote, the implementation of the electoral system. Voters elected to represent 538 voters in 50 states and the District of Columbia. Presidential candidates to get more than half of the electoral votes (at least 270 tickets) to win. The number of electoral votes in the state of the United States is equal to that of the state in the United States and in the number of members of the Senate and the house of Representatives. The Senate is composed of 2 members elected by each state, and the number of members of the house of Representatives is determined according to theproportion of the population of each state. The United States on election day is the first Monday of November (ie November 2nd to November 8 days between Tuesday) 美国总统选举是美国最重要的选举制度。总统选举每四年举行一次。 当前美国总统选举需要经历以下四个阶段:候选人的提名、选举、总统的选举,最后由选民投票选出总统候选人。 美国总统由选民投票,实行选举制度。在50个州和哥伦比亚特区,选民选出代表538个选民。总统候选人获得半数以上的选举人票(至少270张票)获胜。 在美国的州内的选举人票的数量相当于美国的州,在参议院和众议院的议员人数相等。参议院由每个州选出的2个成员组成,众议院的成员的数目是根据每个州的人口的比例确定的。 美国在选举日是十一月的第一个星期一(即11月2日至11月8日日之间的星期二) 四对于托福和雅思考试的了解 The International English proficiency test is organized by the British Council, the University of Cambridge Local Examination Committee and the Australian Education International Development Agency. This test is for the application to the Commonwealth countries (UK, Australia, Canada, New Zealand, etc.) to study abroad, the training of non English speaking countries, students, used to assess the ability of candidates to use english. Now many British Commonwealth countries to apply for their skilled immigrants who also adopted this test, as the applicant's proficiency in English proficiency certification. IELTS consists of four parts, followed by listening, reading, writing and speaking,篇七:托福独立写作英文用法基本规则 智课网TOEFL备考资料 托福独立写作英文用法基本规则 摘要: 托福独立写作英文用法基本规则,本篇文章从9个方面分析了托福独立写作英文用法基本规则,考生可以结合视频和笔记,掌握这些写作方法,提高写作水平。 在 托福 写作部分,高分作文有一个共同的特点就是正确的运用了英语。什么是正确的运用了英语呢?下面小编就结合视频为大家分享托福独立写作英文用法基本规则的相关笔记。 1. 当三个以上的词并列时,除了最后一个词外,其他间用逗号隔幵。 例如: Red, white, and green Honest, energetic, but headstrong He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of its content. 2. 逗号之间放插入句。 因为常常很难确定一个短语或者句子是否是插入语,所以这个规则应用起来很难。如果断开对句子的语流影响非常轻微,那么可以安全的省略逗号。然而,无论这种断开是轻微的还是重大的,决不能省略一个逗号而保留另一个逗号。 3.非限定性定语从句用逗号隔开 The audience, which had at first been indifferent, became more and more interested. 4.限定性定语从句不能用逗号隔开 The candidate who best meet these requirements will obtain the place. 5.不要用逗号连接独立从句;如早想把语法上意思上完整,且不用连词连接的两个或两个以上的从句组成一个并列句,正确的标点符号应该是分号。 Peter's stories arc entertaining; they are full of exciting adventures. Peter's stories arc entertaining, for they are full of exciting adventures. I had never been in the place before so I had difficulty in finding my way about. 如果第二个从句之前是一个副词,如before , accordingly , besides, then therefore 或是 thus ,而不是连词,仍然使用分号。 Mon proposes, God disposes. The gate swung apart, the bridge foil, the portcullis was drawn up. 如果几个从句都很短,句式结构也很相似,常允许使用逗号隔开。 谨记:不要把逗号当句号使用。 6.放在句首的分词必须和句子的主语保持一致。 Walking slowly down the road, he sow woman accompanied by two children. He saw a woman, accompanied by two children, walking slowly down the road. 7.以连词和介词开始的分词短语,同位语名词,形容词短语也必须和主语保持一致。 On arriving in Chicago,his friends met him at the station.这个句子是错误的 When he arrived (or, on his arrival) Chicago, his friends met him at the station.这个句子是正确的。 8.如果想大力突出某个词或者词组,最好将其置于句尾。 Humanity has hardly advanced in fortitude since that time, although it has advanced in many other ways. 自那时起,人类在坚韧上就毫无建树,尽量在许多方面取得进展。 9.句首是句子中另外一个显著位置。除了主语,句子中的任何成分被放在句首时,都可以得到加强。 Deceit or treachery he could never forgive. 以上就是托福独立写作英文用法基本规则,考生可以结合视频和笔记掌握英语用法的规则,提高写作质量,攻克 托福写作 。 相关字搜索: 托福独立写作英文用法基本规则 篇八:独立写作范文 Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying. As a high school student, frequent sleep deprivation is a common problem. Teachers often try to cram the overloaded amount of class material into a limited amount of time. Every year, there are so many topics that teachers need to cover and students receive far too much stress from it. If the school year is extended, then the teacher does not have to push through all the materials and students can have more time absorbing the knowledge. Students could receive a better and more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying because they can sleep more to stay healthy and also have more time to digest each lesson. One can argue that having a shorter semester can allow students to get a longer break. Students can spend more time having fun and relaxing. They can visit interesting cities or spend the time to bond with friends. However, after coming back from a long break, students can find it hard to adjust to a rigorous school life. They might have difficulties staying focus in school. Furthermore, after a long period of fun, students might have forgotten previous course material, and teacher have to waste time to do a review session to refresh the students’ memories. Therefore, it is better to have a shorter break and a longer school year. The first effect of extending the school year is the increase in the amount of sleep. Because teachers are less pressured to teach as much everyday, they do not have to assign as much work. Therefore, students can have more time to do each assignment and this can allow them to sleep earlier. Maintaining eight hours of sleep is essential for keeping a good health. It is important that our bodies receive enough sleep to be able to function properly and strengthen our immune systems. If students were constantly deprived of sleep, then they would be getting sick all the time and would not be able to concentrate in class and fully learn the class materials. It is important to stay healthy in order to succeed in school and earn a good grade. Students can focus more with more sleep so they can learn better. In addition, another effect of spending 11 months a year studying is that students can have more time to fully understand the lessons. Since the materials can be spread over a longer time, students have more time for each lesson. Therefore, if a student has a question about any part of the material, he can spend more time to figure it out or ask his teacher. If the school year were shorter, then the student might be pressured to move on to the next lesson without even understanding the previous. This can lead to the student failing his classes. From this example, it can be seen that having more time to ask and interpret the lessons can benefit slower students and help them achieve a better education. Also, since 11 months is a lot more than a normal school year, even if the teacher teaches at a slow pace, he can still cover more material. Therefore, students can be taught more and understand more knowledge. More sleep and more time to learn are two important benefits from extending the school year to 11 months. This can lead to a healthier lifestyle and better grades in school. In 11 months, students can learn more lessons and also be able to fully understand every one of them. Spending more time in school can help students receive a better and more efficient education. (596) The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Whenever I feel like I am under a lot of pressure, I like to talk to my friends about my problems and do some fun activities with them. Spending time alone does not necessarily allow me to feel better, instead, bottling up all my stress actually depress me more deeply. For me, the best way is not to spend time alone. The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time with my friends and family and have fun with them. There is no denying that one way to relax is to spend time alone. One can listen to music or read a book to reduce stress. In addition, one can also take a walk to ponder about the problems. Through doing so, one can come up with a solution independently and feel better. However, a potential problem with this type of method is that it might not be mentally healthy to keep all the stress inside. Trying to deal with more anxiety than one is capable of can lead to psychological problems and can actually cause one to feel worse. Therefore, one should seek other ways to relax and reduce stress, such as spending time with others. The initial approach is to deal with stress is to talk to my friends. Through communication, one can often feel more relaxed and be able to process one’s thoughts more clearly. For example, if I feel overly stressed before a test, the first thing I do would be to go talk to my friends. As I complain about how hard the tests are or how I don’t have enough time to study, I begin to feel less pressured. I begin to relax more and think about the situation more clearly. Often, we would gradually change the subject into something more interesting, something we enjoy more. This allows me to feel more relaxed and less anxious. Therefore, if one truly wishes to relax, then one should talk to one’s friends. After all, friends should be the ones who are willing to listen to your miseries and help you better and happier. If talking isn’t enough to make you feel more relaxed, then you can also try to do some fun activities with your friends. For example, for me, the best way to feel relaxed is to watch a comedy with my friends, and discuss with my friends the content of the show afterwards. I always feel like I am laughing away my problems, leaving behind the difficult problems that are going on in my life. Furthermore, there are many more methods to relax than to watch movies. If you really enjoy sports, then go play basketball with your friends. If you love music, then go sing with your friends. Whatever you love to do, being able to know that your friends are there for you can really help you feel more relaxed. Spending time alone will not allow you to feel truly relaxed. The best way is to spend time with your friends and let them help you feel better. Talking to your friends or doing something fun with them can really make a difference. Spending time with others is the best way to relax and feel less stressed.(539) In order to attract good students, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities. Good students are those who have a thirst for knowledge and those who are willing to challenge themselves to search for the truth. Social activities are important because they teach important social skills, but these skills can be practiced during academic events as well, such as group research project or book discussion. Good students should be more willing to perform academics task than to spend time purely socializing. Instead of funding social activities like dances, a university should fund research projects and facilities in order to attract good students. Social activities are important because they allow students to learn how to interact with others. Through attending a social gathering, one can meet new friends and form valuable relationships. Those relationships can help one in the future from things as trivial as getting help for homework to things as important as getting advice to make a career choice. However, this is the only purpose of socializing, as it does not teach one anything else. It is a bad use of time because one could be learning more important knowledge.Therefore, good students should be able to attend academic events instead since they can form relationships with their peers too while learning new things. When one considers which university to apply to, an exciting research project is often much more persuasive than a great social gathering. Personally, I would love to be given an opportunity to participate in discovering science and learn. I know that my friends would also die for a similar chance that fits with their field of interest. When we researched about which college to apply to, we always look at which programs are available and if that interests us. Research programs form an important program in deciding whether the university is worth going to and indicates its education quality. In addition to research programs, having great resources is also an indication of great education. People come to universities hoping to learn; therefore guaranteeing high quality of education will definitely appeal to good students. Libraries are needed to provide resources and to help the students learn better. They allow student to find the materials needed for class projects and also to expand their knowledge on various areas during their free time. Furthermore, the school can fund laboratories to so that students can perform more experiments and explore science more. This can allow students to have hands-on experience with the concepts taught in science classes. Funding facilities should be a priority as opposed to funding social activities. One might think that social activities are helpful since they teach students important skills, like learning how to interact with others. However, during a research or finding information at a library, one must also interact with one’s peers and thus be able to work with others well. In addition, students are more interested in research and libraries because good students love to learn and explore the secrets in this universe. Funding these facilities is killing two birds with one stone. Therefore, funding social events is not needed to attract good student. On the other hand, offering excellent research programs and having a resourceful library are temptations a good student cannot resist.(527)篇九:托福写作之手把手教你写出优秀独立作文 智课网TOEFL备考资料 托福写作之手把手教你写出优秀独立作文 摘要: 我是3月16日的考友,作文28,阅读30,另外两项没做好,只有100,准备再战了... 虽然成绩不好,但在作文方面还是比较得心应手,考试之前也有给几个欧友改过一些作文,发现了大家有一些比较 我是3月16日的考友,作文28,阅读30,另外两项没做好,只有100,准备再战了... 虽然成绩不好,但在作文方面还是比较得心应手,考试之前也有给几个欧友改过一些作文,发现了大家有一些比较集中的毛病,一篇一篇地改,一篇一篇地讲经验,觉得太麻烦,在这里集中开个帖子说一下。 其实很多不擅长作文的考友存在的问题都有惊人的类似点,改几个人的作文就能归纳出相同的突出问题: 1,审题不到位,导致后面展开论述不贴和题目甚至跑题。 2,第一段主题段不知道怎么展开。 3,为了追求高尚大的句型错误连篇,尤其是第一段的开篇(强调第一段是因为一上来你就有语法错误,根本藏不住!分数自然低!) 4,不知道怎么展开1+3+1中的3段论述,不会举例子!! 5,论述不完整!!!(很严重!) 大家作文中几乎都存在这几个问题,但其中最重要的,是破题!!! 我个人认为,同时很多托福雅思老师也认为,作文其实是最简单最容易提高分数的一项!因为这是应试作文!有固定的模式!! 绝对能够短期提分数!! 我现在以两个题目,跟大家说一下独立作文到底怎么写,其中最重要的是怎么破题!!! 例文1:Teacher should assign homework to students everyday? 第一步:解构题目。 主语:Teacher . 动词:assign homework 受方: students 方式(how):everyday 拿到题目,迅速在脑海中按照主语、动词、谓语和方式四个关键词解构题目。本题一个should,暗含的意思是,是否beneficial,是否good。 破题关键词的意思是:在下面的展开论述中,每一个词都不能落下!!!!!比如上题,你就不能落了 everyday。同时,不要自己发散关键词的意思!!(比如,不要把everyday等同于too much!!因为题目中只是说每天布置作业,并不意味着每天的量都很大。如果你想从everyday= too much来这个角度展开思路,你要落在纸面上。不能默认! ) 这题有两种角度可以切入,从teacher的角度,比如,每天布置作业加大了老师的工作量,老师过度疲劳,所以不应该;从students的角度,每天做作业导致压力过大,过度疲劳,对学习失去兴趣,所以不应该。 所以,这个题目,从切入点写,我们可以有三种方式,分别是: 1,should not。对老师非常不好。 2,should not。对学生非常不好。 3,should not。对学生和老师都不好。 选择相反的should的切入点,亦然。 第二步:选择立场。 Agree or disagree? 在最短的时间内,在脑海中迅速的过一遍两种观点,看哪一种更好写。如果你在选择立场时不能立刻想出两个可以展开的观点,就立刻选择相反的立场。 更好写的意思是: 1.能够写出三个支持观点。 2.能够写出例子。 比如,拿到这个题目,我第一反应就是,应该!!!第一反应就是选择对学生好。 第三步:开始敲字。 1,第一段写法: A.选择好立场,把题目改写后直接敲在屏幕上。I agree that the teacher should assign homework to students everyday. 可以改写的方式: I believe that assigning homework by teacher to students is of great benefits. I hold that students can gain a lot by doing homework everyday. I agree that teacher should assign homework to students daily. 大家可以看出,不管怎样的主题句改写,四个已经解构的关键词都不能舍弃!!! B.然后在前面加背景句子。这里的背景句子,一定是你以前已经背下来的万能开头句子了,看大量满分作文后,总结出适合自己的万能开头句。一定要保证句子百分之一百正确!!! 开头的错误会让判卷人很反感。 给大家举几个我背诵下来的万能句: 1/Nowadays the Internet has vastly increased global interaction as well as our knowledge of societies around the world.Isolation is not possible for any nation-physically,economically,environmentally。 2/Today's society is much more diverse, complex, pluralistic and swiftly changeable than ever before,making every social member a sailor driving on the sea under complex weather condition. 3/The world's movie industry has witnessed unprecedented boom in recent years.Delighted by an ample supply of excellent material, people all around the world are thankful for the combined efforts by workers. 然后直接改写关键词就可以。比如套用本题: Today's society is much more diverse, complex and swiftly changeable than ever before, making every social member a sailor driving on the sea under complex weather condition. Thus, teachers are more likely to assign homework everyday to prepare students better for the highly competitive society. C. 在考试状态下,我敲完以上就进入下一步骤了。但是! 以下来自#xg8833920#的外教建议,我也非常认同,只是自己在实战时候没时间敲完下面这些话。 “1. You should introduce opinions from both sides before introducing your own opinion. 做出选择前,briefly state with "some people advacate that...while others believe..." 2. You should futher develop your topic sentence by introducing the benifits of your choice or the reason for your choice.观点阐述完毕后,要发展一下,讲讲by doing this...或者that is because...然后再上案例上论证。” 所以,如果完成全文写作后如果时间还剩余很多,可以把以上两点加上。 比如此题: Some people hold that doing homework everyday lays a heavy burden on the students while others believe it is pretty beneficial. In my opinion, I advacate that ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ because doing homework everyday can help students to XXXXXXX(三个观点简写罗列展开) 第四步:依次敲入三个分论点的段落的主题句+结论。 这样先敲好的好处是——保证三段论结构完整,不至于敲着敲着来不及了。注意使用Firstly, secondly, last but not least;或者 first of all, moreover, in addition,或者其他类型的。必用!! 举例: 写法1: Topic Sentence:同意。 Argument1: Doing homework everyday reinforces what have learned during class, thus doing good to students' performance. Argument2: Doing homework everyday forces students to form the habit of dealing time wisely, which is of great importance for further career. Argument3:Doing homework everyday reminds students of their main task, that is academic study. Conclusion: Teachers' assigning homework everyday will benefit students in many respects, so I totally agree. 写法2: Topic Sentence:不同意。 Argument1: Doing homework everyday forces students to be occupied by study tasks and takes too much spare time, thus harming well-rounded development of students. Argument2: Doing homework everyday discourages students to study positively and actively and reduces their interest of self-study. Argument3:Doing homework everyday harms the harmonious relationship between teachers and students. Conclusion: Teachers' assigning homework everyday will undermine students in many respects, so I totally disagree(转 载于:wWw.xIeLw.com 写 论文 网:如何独立英语作文). 基本上,十分钟过去后,屏幕上你就已经打完我上面列出的这些东西+完整开头了。 第五步:填充三个段落,完整论述每一个观点! 几种方式,牢记于心!! 1,举生活中的事例,“每个人心中都有一个小明” 比如:每天做作业有利于加深记忆。Take my friend Xiaoming for example, once his teacher assigned homework everyday and he benefited from this a lot. He used to be poor at memorising all the equations and notions when learning Maths. One of the reasons lays that his teacher did not assign homework after class, thus he lacked enough chances to practise. As we all know, practice makes perfect. However, his teacher changed the way of assigning homework to a daily way. By doing homework everyday, Xiaoming made faster progress in learning Maths. 这种举例,只要一步一步完整论述完事实,就成了~ 2, 利用名人名言和名人事例展开。 一般格式是,谁谁once said+名言+(他的)事例展开+你自己的总结。本  篇:《龙8国际_龙8娱乐_龙8国际娱乐平台》来源于:龙8国际_龙8娱乐_龙8国际娱乐平台 优秀范文,论文网站
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